Archive for the ‘Writing’ Category

How to Create Memorable Characters, Writers’ Workshop, Victoria, BC

Monday, February 21st, 2011

Creating memorable characters for your genre fiction can be both challenging and rewarding. It ain’t easy but it can be done. And if you’re in Victoria, BC, in May, check out my course which is being offered by Camosun College on Saturday, February 26th from 1:30 – 4:40 pm.

You don’t have to have weird and wacky types like you’d find in Dickens (but bully for you if you do); however, you do want personalities that stand out, that resonate with your readers.

After all, think of any good book or movie. Do you remember the intricacies of the plot? Or do you remember the players?

How about The Sculptress, by Minette Walters, as an example. It’s an award winning mystery novel with a terrific twisty turny plot but what I remember most is the titular character, Olive Martin, as she sat in prison carving human figurines out of wax. Let’s just say she stuck with me.

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The Novel Experience Podcast – Interview with Publisher Clare Thorbes Part 1

Saturday, February 12th, 2011

Hey lovers of words and stories.

Welcome to The Novel Experience®, the podcast dedicated to the craft and art of fiction writing. Listen, enjoy and improve your chances of getting published!

Cover pic for The Novel Experience Podcast

The Novel Experience Podcast

Episode 12: From Words to Print

Today, I begin my three-part chat with publisher, editor and visual artist Clare Thorbes (click link above or below).

Clare brings a diverse perspective to the writing/publishing business, being a professional editor and former co-owner of Salal Press, a boutique publishing company during the nineties.

In this episode, Clare simply and succinctly defines the different levels of editing (something most writers could use) and reveals what she looked for in a publishable manuscript.

Listen and discover if your work makes the grade! (duration ~12 minutes)

The Novel Experience Podcast Ep. 12 – Clare Thorbes

We celebrate Valentine’s Day with our showcase song by Glynne Turner, a pretty snippet titled Avatar. Make sure you give your Sweetie a squeeze!

Find out more about Clare’s editing services and her art by emailing her at thorbesedit (at) gmail (dot) com.

How to Write A Mystery Novel 17 – Character Development

Friday, February 11th, 2011

Intro: I occasionally teach a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. The students eat it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.

The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.

So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 17)

The last group of posts have focused on the point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale.

Most recently, we’re moved into creating the people who populate your story. I nicknamed this step: Haven’t We Met Before?

There are three types of CHARACTERS who populate fiction: Major, Secondary and Minor.

Obviously, your major characters are the most important and require the bulk of your thoughts, so take some time and get to know them…intimately.

Don't Be Shy

This is simplified if you ask a lot of questions, moving from broader basic information, to more intimate details and finally into fun and quirky stuff. In episode 16, we began by musing about personal details.

You’re Invading My Personal Space

Today, we did deeper and get even more personal.

Armed with your budding characters, begin to flesh out their temperament and PERSONALITY TRAITS, choosing four interesting ones that help determine speech patterns, thoughts and actions.

These four traits will help you bring your character to life when you are writing their dialogue, movements, reactions and feelings.

Consider PRIME SUSPECT’S Detective Superintendent Tennison’s qualities; she’s pig-headed, acerbic, driven and insecure. (more…)

How to Write A Mystery Novel 16 – Character Development

Friday, February 4th, 2011

Intro: I occasionally teach a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. The students eat it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.

The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.

So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 16)

The last group of posts (most recent: ) have focused on the point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale.

Most recently, we’re moved into creating the people who populate your story. I nicknamed this step: Haven’t We Met Before?

There are three types of CHARACTERS who populate fiction: Major, Secondary and Minor.

Obviously, your major characters are the most important and require the bulk of your thoughts, so take some time and get to know them…intimately.

You're Invading My Personal Space

Leopard (credit E. Polinsky)

This is simplified if you ask a lot of questions, moving from broader basic information, to more intimate details and finally into fun and quirky stuff. In episode 15, we began by musing Tombstone details.

You’re Invading My Personal Space

Today, we did deeper and get a little more personal by diving into answers for these personality queries:

  • What are their key values?
  • What’s their inner motivation: why is she or he doing what she or he does? The answer to this shapes the story.

Strong motivations stem from potent emotions or inner wounds, like undying love, obsessive hatred, blind ambition, envy, grief, vengeance. Characters with conflicting motivations are more interesting.

    • What are their hopes, fears and dreams?
    • What are their hot button issues? Their health? Their finances? Their relationships?
    • Why are they like this?
    • What do they like and dislike?

    This outta take you a while; it’s challenging work but should be fun. After all, these are YOUR people. So…how’s it feel to be their creator? Pretty cool, eh?

      If you found this of interest, you may wish to see the previous How to Write a Mystery novel posts.

      …Of course, there’ll be MORE how-to write a mystery tips and techniques continued in the next Friday post as we push further to develop the three types of characters that commonly populate genre fiction in: You’re Invading My Personal Space, Part 17.

      How to Write a Mystery Novel – Victoria, BC Writers’ Workshop

      Sunday, January 30th, 2011

      If you live on Vancouver Island, BC, Canada, and you’ve always wanted to write a mystery novel, then take your fingers off the keyboard and listen up.

      I’m again teaching a workshop on writing mystery novels for Camosun College in lovely Victoria, BC. The workshop is based on my experiences crafting a number of published mysteries and on my little how-to primer, Youdunit Whodunit!

      cover image for Youdunit Whodunit!

      The workshop is offered on six consecutive Wednesday evenings from from February 2 to March 9, 2011. For more details and how to register, go to Mystery Writers’ Workshop at Camosun College.

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      Audience Growing – Novel Experience Podcast for Writers

      Monday, January 24th, 2011

      Recently, I realized that The Novel Experience, my podcast dedicated to fiction writing tips and techniques, is gaining ground and recently broke the 1100 downloads mark.

      The Novel Experience Podcast

      The Novel Experience Podcast

      Yeah, I know. Probably piddly stats for many podcasts but nonetheless, I’m pleased.

      Got 10 episodes ‘in the can’ and plan many more this year but could use your help.

      If you’re already at TNX fan, thank you, stay tuned and please consider letting your writer friends in on the Experience!

      If you haven’t heard TNX yet and you’re interested in improving your writing and chances of getting published, please give The Novel Experience a whirl.

      Think you’ll be pleased. I’ve interviewed a variety of published authors. Picked up practical suggestions on thriller writing from best-seller Chevy Stevens, learned some fab insight on screen writing from award-winner Don Truckey and dug deep into character development with best-seller and funny gal Denise Dietz.

      And that’s just a few helpful tidbits, plus you’re missing the helpful excerpts from my how-to write a mystery primer, Youdunit Whodunit!…so what’re you waiting for?

      How to Write A Mystery Novel 15 – Character Development

      Friday, January 21st, 2011

      Intro: I occasionally teach a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. The students eat it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.

      The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.

      So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.

      CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 15)

      The last group of posts (most recent: ) have focused on the point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale.

      Now, we’re moving into creating the people who populate your story. I’ve nicknamed this step: Haven’t We Met Before?

      There are three types of CHARACTERS who populate fiction: Major, Secondary and Minor.

      Obviously, your major characters are the most important and require the bulk of your thoughts, so take some time and get to know them…intimately.

      Hey, don't I know you? (credit: E. Polinsky)

      This is simplified if you ask a lot of questions, moving from broader basic information, to more intimate details and finally into fun and quirky stuff.

      So in the next few posts, we’ll do just that:

      First, ponder some Tombstone Questions to bring life to your gumshoe:

      • What’s their name? Avoid confusing the audience with more than one character with same initials or similar names.
      • How old are they?
      • Who are they?
      • What do they look like? NOT a photographic representation, just bits to help the reader’s imagination. You don’t want them to be disappointed when your story becomes a hit movie, do you?
      • What do they sound like? Do they have an accent? An interesting vocabulary or vocal tic?
      • What do they do?
      • Where did they grow up?
      • What was their childhood like?

      This outta take you a while; it’s challenging work but should be fun. After all, these are YOUR people. So…how’s it feel to be their creator? Pretty cool, eh?

      If you found this of interest, you may wish to see the previous How to Write a Mystery novel posts.

      …Of course, there’ll be MORE how-to write a mystery tips and techniques continued in the next Friday post as we push further to develop the three types of characters that commonly populate genre fiction in: You’re Invading My Personal Space, Part 16.

      Find out further information or how to purchase my mystery-writing primer e-book, jam-packed with ways to immediately improve your writing, by clicking Youdunit Whodunit! (only $2.99 US)

      Biking and Bloomin’ for Creativity

      Tuesday, January 18th, 2011

      I’ve just returned from a fab 60 minute bike ride around the Peninsula. Our weather is fantastic of late, as the pic of snowdrops below suggests.

      January Snowdrops

      January Snowdrops

      I’m not sure about other creative people but I find inspiration in nature and this pair of blossoms from my back yard yesterday really set my thoughts soaring.

      I’ve been pondering a few broad stroke ideas for several new fiction series.

      Think I’ve got a couple that might have ‘legs’ but it’s a slow and challenging process. What feels like a great concept at initial blush can curl and die after some hard thinking.

      That’s where the biking comes in; I think best while moving and so will be doing a lot of pedalling around my beautiful island in the near future.

      A peachy life!

      So…how do you work through your creative process? Love to know.

      The Novel Experience Podcast – Interview with Screenwriter Don Truckey Part 3

      Wednesday, January 12th, 2011

      Hey lovers of words and stories.

      Welcome to The Novel Experience®, the podcast dedicated to the craft and art of fiction writing. Listen, enjoy and improve your chances of getting published!

      Cover pic for The Novel Experience Podcast

      The Novel Experience Podcast

      Episode 11: From Screen to Page Part 3

      I’m pleased to announce the release of the last episode of my three-part conversation with award-winning Canadian screenwriter and children’s author, Don Truckey (click link above or below).

      Don, whose credits include the television series, Street Legal and Urban Angel, and the movies, Net Worth and Chicks with Sticks, discusses the differences in the crafts of writing prose and penning a screenplay. He’s also the author of the children’s series, The Adventures of Caraway Kim.

      Don and I worked together on some TV pitches and scripts; he’s funny, talented, quick thinking and very professional. Plus, he wrote a movie about women’s hockey!

      If you’ve ever thought of writing a screenplay or adapting a novel to the screen, you’re gonna want to listen to this episode as Don offers practical tips to help you fine tune your blockbuster, provides nifty insights into the screenwriting world and gives us a taste of his new script. (duration ~20 minutes)

      The Novel Experience Podcast Ep. 11 – Don Truckey 3

      This episode’s showcase song by Glynne Turner, a lovely story aptly titled Our Children, resonates our children’s theme.

      Click below to discover more about The Adventures of Caraway Kim by Don Truckey:

      Epubbing.com Guest Author Leanne Dyck on Writing and Submitting

      Friday, January 7th, 2011

      You may recall that in November I welcomed my first guest author, Leanne Dyck.

      Her first post was about self-publishing.

      I’m going to forgo my usual mystery writing column this week to offer her an opp for another post, in time for the publication of her latest knitting mystery, The Sweater Curse.

      The Sweater Curse by Leanne Dyck

      The Sweater Curse by Leanne Dyck

      Congrats to Leanne and thank you for your honesty regarding the writer’s lot.

      Writing and Submitting by Leanne Dyck

      Knowledge gleaned from a writers’ magazine: a writer’s job is to write and submit. Sounds simple. Until you consider: Write what? Submit where?

      In my teens I was seduced by two passions: knitting and writing.
      Writing about knitting intrigued me. In 2005, I began writing knitting-related short stories, flash fiction and poems. Here’s an example called Rebellion:

      A small group of mothers gather in a kitchen to drink coffee and chat.
      Cindy starts, “He stays out all night. Who knows where he goes.”
      Linda shares, “She listens to that rap music garbage. Loud. It breaks my eardrums and I’m downstairs.”
      Michelle joins in, “He is disrespectful. He calls me an ‘old cow’ and worse. His teachers all tell me he doesn’t listen, but what can I do?”
      Ann adds, “First she got her ears pierced, then her nose. Now she has piercings and tattoos all over the bloody place. She even shaved her head. When I say anything she says, ‘It’s my body.’ I have no say. No say.”
      Then it’s Rebecca’s turn. “My daughter knits.”
      Silence.
      Then the room explodes with laughter.
      “Yeah, I thought the same thing. I thought ‘a mother’s joy a knitter’. I thought we would sail through the teenage years. No problem at all. Then I started noticing what she was knitting. Let’s just say no yarn manufacturer was getting rich off her. “I told her she was sending the wrong message. I told her that guys would think she was slut, but what does Mom know?”
      She is answered by a chorus of “Nothing.”
      “Guess what I’m knitting? Come on guess.” She pulls a baby pink something out of her purse. “A baby blanket. Aren’t you going to congratulate me? I’m going to be a Grandma.”

      To attract surfers to my knitwear designer web site, www.oknitting.com, I added a blog to my homepage. On the blog I shared news, views, tips. Occasionally, I also posted one of my stories or poems. Wow, was I surprised when I realized these pieces received the most hits.

      Inspired, I wrote more and soon had enough to fill an 80-minute audio book. I self-published Novelty Yarn in August 2006.

      Here’s a review:

      “Novelty Yarn contains a collection of small, tasty morsels that will continue to surprise you right up until the last bite…Ranging from childhood memories about 4-H knitting and lessons from Grandma to night dreams about wild women knitting in the forest, each segment evokes a different mood. Many of the stories made me laugh out loud, while others made me pause…to meditate for a few minutes. The stories are separated by brief interludes of acoustic guitar music…The guitar intervals are just long enough to let your mind rest between the stories. The sensation is like cleansing your palette after sampling each vintage at a wine tasting. The total experience was delicious.” (Donna Druchunas The Knitted Rug, Artic Lace)

      I did receive a negative review. The main complaint was that the stories weren’t long enough.

      Interestingly, I had begun writing what promised to be a longer piece: The Sweater Curse. Emboldened I rolled up my sleeves and invested more time crafting it. As I wrote, I read the work of other knitting-inspired authors. I found cute stories about nice knitters.

      “We’re not all nice!” I screamed. Did you hear me? My main character Gwen Bjarnson did and she agreed.

      All writers work at their own pace and in their own way. It was during this time that I discovered what worked for me. What I like to do is write and complete shorter pieces while I tackle something longer. That’s what I did while I wrote The Sweater Curse. Among other projects, I wrote articles for knitting magazines. I gained validation when I received my first cheque for writing one these articles.

      Month after month, year after year, I returned to The Sweater Curse. Until, one fateful day, I dotted the last ‘i’ and crossed the last ‘t’. Now what?

      I contacted the editor I’d worked with on Maynely A Mystery. I was confident that she would tell me if The Sweater Curse sucked. She liked it and agreed to proof it in preparation for submission.

      I’d answered the question: what to write? Now, I needed to address: where to submit?

      Unlike Maynely A Mystery that was developed for a small audience, I felt The Sweater Curse would have a wider appeal.

      In my search, I left no rock unturned. I contacted literary agents and book publishers. My desire to network with other writers, led me to the Romance Angel chat group. It was here that I found the new epublisher Decadent Publishing.

      I visited www.decadentpublishing.com and carefully read their submission guidelines. I spent days polishing my synopsis. I sought the help of fellow authors; they were generous with their helpful feedback. Finally, I took a breath, crossed my fingers and hit send.

      Shortly after, waiting in my inbox, was an email from Decadent Publishing. I was apprehensive. I was certain it was another rejection. I braced myself and opened the email. I skimmed the contents looking for the familiar wording. Instead I found ‘will contract’. I re-read it. I asked my husband to read it aloud.

      Acceptance, sweet, acceptance, they wanted my story.

      I can’t say enough positive things about Decadent. They are a new author incubator. Wrapped in a cocoon of positive energy, I have greatly benefited from my involvement with them.

      My journey as a writer has just begun. My dream is to continue to write and submit.

      Congrats and thanks, Leanne. You may join her virtual launch party on January 10th to celebrate the publication of The Sweater Curse.