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The Novel Experience Podcast – Interview with Screenwriter Don Truckey Part 3

Wednesday, January 12th, 2011

Hey lovers of words and stories.

Welcome to The Novel Experience®, the podcast dedicated to the craft and art of fiction writing. Listen, enjoy and improve your chances of getting published!

Cover pic for The Novel Experience Podcast

The Novel Experience Podcast

Episode 11: From Screen to Page Part 3

I’m pleased to announce the release of the last episode of my three-part conversation with award-winning Canadian screenwriter and children’s author, Don Truckey (click link above or below).

Don, whose credits include the television series, Street Legal and Urban Angel, and the movies, Net Worth and Chicks with Sticks, discusses the differences in the crafts of writing prose and penning a screenplay. He’s also the author of the children’s series, The Adventures of Caraway Kim.

Don and I worked together on some TV pitches and scripts; he’s funny, talented, quick thinking and very professional. Plus, he wrote a movie about women’s hockey!

If you’ve ever thought of writing a screenplay or adapting a novel to the screen, you’re gonna want to listen to this episode as Don offers practical tips to help you fine tune your blockbuster, provides nifty insights into the screenwriting world and gives us a taste of his new script. (duration ~20 minutes)

The Novel Experience Podcast Ep. 11 – Don Truckey 3

This episode’s showcase song by Glynne Turner, a lovely story aptly titled Our Children, resonates our children’s theme.

Click below to discover more about The Adventures of Caraway Kim by Don Truckey:

Epubbing.com Guest Author Leanne Dyck on Writing and Submitting

Friday, January 7th, 2011

You may recall that in November I welcomed my first guest author, Leanne Dyck.

Her first post was about self-publishing.

I’m going to forgo my usual mystery writing column this week to offer her an opp for another post, in time for the publication of her latest knitting mystery, The Sweater Curse.

The Sweater Curse by Leanne Dyck

The Sweater Curse by Leanne Dyck

Congrats to Leanne and thank you for your honesty regarding the writer’s lot.

Writing and Submitting by Leanne Dyck

Knowledge gleaned from a writers’ magazine: a writer’s job is to write and submit. Sounds simple. Until you consider: Write what? Submit where?

In my teens I was seduced by two passions: knitting and writing.
Writing about knitting intrigued me. In 2005, I began writing knitting-related short stories, flash fiction and poems. Here’s an example called Rebellion:

A small group of mothers gather in a kitchen to drink coffee and chat.
Cindy starts, “He stays out all night. Who knows where he goes.”
Linda shares, “She listens to that rap music garbage. Loud. It breaks my eardrums and I’m downstairs.”
Michelle joins in, “He is disrespectful. He calls me an ‘old cow’ and worse. His teachers all tell me he doesn’t listen, but what can I do?”
Ann adds, “First she got her ears pierced, then her nose. Now she has piercings and tattoos all over the bloody place. She even shaved her head. When I say anything she says, ‘It’s my body.’ I have no say. No say.”
Then it’s Rebecca’s turn. “My daughter knits.”
Silence.
Then the room explodes with laughter.
“Yeah, I thought the same thing. I thought ‘a mother’s joy a knitter’. I thought we would sail through the teenage years. No problem at all. Then I started noticing what she was knitting. Let’s just say no yarn manufacturer was getting rich off her. “I told her she was sending the wrong message. I told her that guys would think she was slut, but what does Mom know?”
She is answered by a chorus of “Nothing.”
“Guess what I’m knitting? Come on guess.” She pulls a baby pink something out of her purse. “A baby blanket. Aren’t you going to congratulate me? I’m going to be a Grandma.”

To attract surfers to my knitwear designer web site, www.oknitting.com, I added a blog to my homepage. On the blog I shared news, views, tips. Occasionally, I also posted one of my stories or poems. Wow, was I surprised when I realized these pieces received the most hits.

Inspired, I wrote more and soon had enough to fill an 80-minute audio book. I self-published Novelty Yarn in August 2006.

Here’s a review:

“Novelty Yarn contains a collection of small, tasty morsels that will continue to surprise you right up until the last bite…Ranging from childhood memories about 4-H knitting and lessons from Grandma to night dreams about wild women knitting in the forest, each segment evokes a different mood. Many of the stories made me laugh out loud, while others made me pause…to meditate for a few minutes. The stories are separated by brief interludes of acoustic guitar music…The guitar intervals are just long enough to let your mind rest between the stories. The sensation is like cleansing your palette after sampling each vintage at a wine tasting. The total experience was delicious.” (Donna Druchunas The Knitted Rug, Artic Lace)

I did receive a negative review. The main complaint was that the stories weren’t long enough.

Interestingly, I had begun writing what promised to be a longer piece: The Sweater Curse. Emboldened I rolled up my sleeves and invested more time crafting it. As I wrote, I read the work of other knitting-inspired authors. I found cute stories about nice knitters.

“We’re not all nice!” I screamed. Did you hear me? My main character Gwen Bjarnson did and she agreed.

All writers work at their own pace and in their own way. It was during this time that I discovered what worked for me. What I like to do is write and complete shorter pieces while I tackle something longer. That’s what I did while I wrote The Sweater Curse. Among other projects, I wrote articles for knitting magazines. I gained validation when I received my first cheque for writing one these articles.

Month after month, year after year, I returned to The Sweater Curse. Until, one fateful day, I dotted the last ‘i’ and crossed the last ‘t’. Now what?

I contacted the editor I’d worked with on Maynely A Mystery. I was confident that she would tell me if The Sweater Curse sucked. She liked it and agreed to proof it in preparation for submission.

I’d answered the question: what to write? Now, I needed to address: where to submit?

Unlike Maynely A Mystery that was developed for a small audience, I felt The Sweater Curse would have a wider appeal.

In my search, I left no rock unturned. I contacted literary agents and book publishers. My desire to network with other writers, led me to the Romance Angel chat group. It was here that I found the new epublisher Decadent Publishing.

I visited www.decadentpublishing.com and carefully read their submission guidelines. I spent days polishing my synopsis. I sought the help of fellow authors; they were generous with their helpful feedback. Finally, I took a breath, crossed my fingers and hit send.

Shortly after, waiting in my inbox, was an email from Decadent Publishing. I was apprehensive. I was certain it was another rejection. I braced myself and opened the email. I skimmed the contents looking for the familiar wording. Instead I found ‘will contract’. I re-read it. I asked my husband to read it aloud.

Acceptance, sweet, acceptance, they wanted my story.

I can’t say enough positive things about Decadent. They are a new author incubator. Wrapped in a cocoon of positive energy, I have greatly benefited from my involvement with them.

My journey as a writer has just begun. My dream is to continue to write and submit.

Congrats and thanks, Leanne. You may join her virtual launch party on January 10th to celebrate the publication of The Sweater Curse.

Epubbing.com Fiction Writing Tip: Show, Don’t Tell

Monday, January 3rd, 2011

Show, don’t tell is a classic mantra for fiction writers.

It’s often misunderstood and some writers find it hard to put into practice.

Well, my sister just sent me this terrific quote from Anton Chekhov that nails it:

Glinting Light

Glinting Light

Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.

Isn’t that amazing? So simple, so clear, so elegant…and as illustrative as it is riveting.

Thanks, Carla. Now we all have a bit of Chekhov’s genius in our writer’s toolkit!

Secret to Happiness from The Novel Experience

Thursday, December 30th, 2010

The last six months, I’ve been interviewing writers for my podcast, The Novel Experience.

It’s been terrific: fabulous interviewees offering fascinating tales and wonderful writing tips. Am looking forward to more in 2011.

As the year draws to a close, I’ve been pondering what I’ve learned and heard and have come up with the following two-steps to a successful life:

Find something you LOVE.

Learn to do it WELL.

And…you’re on you way to being HAPPY!

Glynne Turner & Nicola Furlong celebrating Their Quillr Multimedia E-book


As you can see by the photo, I’m giving it my best shot.

So…what’re you waiting for?

Merry Christmas from The Novel Experience Podcast

Saturday, December 25th, 2010
Christmas Greeting

Christmas Greeting

Thanks for listening to The Novel Experience Podcast.

More terrific interviews next year; however, you may always catch up on previous episodes.

Merry Christmas!

The Novel Experience Podcast – Interview with Screenwriter Don Truckey Part 2

Wednesday, December 22nd, 2010

Hey lovers of words and stories.

Welcome to The Novel Experience®, the podcast dedicated to the craft and art of fiction writing. Listen, enjoy and improve your chances of getting published!

Cover pic for The Novel Experience Podcast

The Novel Experience Podcast

Episode 10: From Screen to Page Part 2

I’m pleased to announce the release of the second episode of my three-part conversation with award-winning Canadian screenwriter and children’s author, Don Truckey (click link above or below).

Don, whose credits include the television series, Street Legal and Urban Angel, and the movies, Net Worth and Chicks with Sticks, discusses the differences in the crafts of writing prose and penning a screenplay. He’s also the author of the children’s series, The Adventures of Caraway Kim.

Don and I worked together on some TV pitches and scripts; he’s funny, talented, quick thinking and very professional. Plus, he wrote a movie about women’s hockey!

If you’ve ever thought of writing a screenplay or adapting a novel to the screen, you’re gonna want to listen to this episode as Don offers practical tips to help you write that blockbuster and provides nifty insights into the screenwriting world.

He’ll also answer a couple of fascinating questions: Which creative mind would he prefer to collaborate with: a novelist or a playwright? And, what do the instructions for a light airplane have to do with penning a script? (duration ~20 minutes)

The Novel Experience Podcast Ep. 10 – Don Truckey

This episode’s showcase song by Glynne Turner is a rockin’ tune, aptly titledInspiration.

Click below to discover more about The Adventures of Caraway Kim by Don Truckey:

Romance Rocks E-Book Sales

Thursday, December 9th, 2010

Just read this article from the NY Times which describes the Lusty Tales and Hot Sales of romance e-books.

Seems gals are buying romance e-books with abandon.

Warrior Women

Warrior Women

Anyone surprised? Not moi.

Just think of some of the benefits to romance readers:

  • quick (and often less expensive) access to new titles
  • pleasure of reading romance in public without hearing snickers or receiving disapproving stares
  • first time opportunity to buy back lists of their favourite authors
  • chance to read ‘racier’ romances with no one being the wiser.

Throw Darts at a Cheesecake

Throw Darts at a Cheesecake

I’m sure they are many more. Now, how about some of the advantages to romance authors?

  • terrific new market growing in leaps and bounds
  • re-sales of out of print books
  • new electronic publishers seeking authors
  • higher royalties.

Wolf in Tiger Stripes

Wolf in Tiger Stripes

Win win for everyone…now, if I could garner interest in Deadly Games, my cutting-edge action/adventure/romance series that sends former pro athlete, Erin Black, undercover into the high-stakes, killer-instinct world of women’s professional sports.

Originally pitched to Harlequin for their Bombshell line but the new line bombed before my kick-ass heroine, Erin, had a chance.

Hmm…

(Oh and thanks to Amazon.com for the three covers, each depicting a terrific romance e-book written by a good friend.)

The Novel Experience Podcast – Interview with Screenwriter Don Truckey Part 1

Thursday, December 2nd, 2010

Hey lovers of words and stories.

Welcome to The Novel Experience®, the podcast dedicated to the craft and art of fiction writing. Listen, enjoy and improve your chances of getting published!

Cover pic for The Novel Experience Podcast

The Novel Experience Podcast

Episode 8: From Screen to Page Part 1

I’m pleased to announce the release of the first of my three-part conversation with award-winning Canadian screenwriter and children’s author, Don Truckey (click link above or below).

Don, whose credits include the television series, Street Legal and Urban Angel, and the movies, Net Worth and Chicks with Sticks, discusses the differences in the crafts of writing prose and penning a screenplay. He’s also the author of the children’s series, The Adventures of Caraway Kim.

Don and I worked together on some TV pitches and scripts; he’s funny, talented, quick thinking and very professional. Plus, he wrote a movie about women’s hockey!

Tune in to learn Don’s simple but insightful tip on how to discover the voice and thought processes of another writer. I’m gonna give it a try. (duration ~20 minutes)

The Novel Experience Podcast Ep. 9 – Don Truckey

This episode’s showcase song by Glynne Turner is a lovely ballad, called Meet Me.

Click below to discover more about The Adventures of Caraway Kim by Don Truckey:

Smashwords Inks Deal To Increase Author Royalties

Wednesday, December 1st, 2010

Good ol’ Smashwords, the people’s e-book creator and distributor, announced more good news today. Here’s an excerpt:

This is big news. Effective today, we’ve increased royalty rates for sales at Kobo, B&N and Sony, and these three retailers have also stopped discounting.

What this means to you:

A: For retailer sales from today forward, you now earn 60% of the list price
at Kobo, B&N and Sony, in addition to the 60% you’re already earning at Apple
and Diesel.

B: All Smashwords retailers have stopped discounting prices. This means you
control the price at retail.

Previously, you earned 42.5% of your retail price at B&N and Sony, and 46.75% at Kobo. Kobo actually completed the switch to fixed pricing about two weeks ago.

How’d we do this? We renegotiated our contracts with Kobo, B&N and Sony to move them to what’s commonly known as the “agency” model.

Learn more about this important news over at the Smashwords blog:

Way to go, Smashwords!

Smashwords logo

If you’re thinking of self-publishing an e-book, there’s no better place to start.

If you need any help, shoot me an email at epubbing (at) shaw (dot) ca.

How to Write A Mystery Novel 14 – Character Development

Friday, November 19th, 2010

Intro: I occasionally teach a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. The students eat it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.

The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.

So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 14)

The last group of posts have concentrated on the story structure of a mystery novel. Been there; done that. Now we’re onto developing characters or as I like to think of it: Ready for my close-up, Mr. DeMille.

In the initial post on character development, I introduced an essential question: Who’s telling your story? You can have more than one storyteller but for our purposes, we’ll stick to one.

You need a point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale. There are two common POVs in fiction writing: First Person, which we discussed in a previous post, and Third Person.

LEMME TELL IT MY WAY: In this Point of View, the writer chooses to tell the story from more of a distance by narrating with “He said” or “They said”. Today, I’m finishing my discussion on POV by offering a couple of cautionary notes.

In the most recent posts, I offered some reasons to choose Third Person POV; and introduced all of the three main viewpoint types: the Limited Multiple POV, the Limited Detached POV and the Know All/Omniscient POV.

Dueling POVs

Dueling POVs

One challenge for the newbie writer when using any Point of View is to maintain the appropriate viewpoint and not switch mid-scene. Once you’ve chosen your point of view, STAY in that person’s mindset for the entire scene or chapter.

If you wish to tell a scene from another player’s POV, go ahead; just make sure that the reader is witnessing each chunk of the story from a single POV at any one time.

How NOT to write Multiple Third Person Point of View

Consider the following example:

John stared, unable to take his eyes off Emily’s disfigured face. Her nose was deformed, her eye sockets bulged and puckered skin twisted her cheeks. He swallowed, trying to gain time.

Emily stiffened. John’s reaction wasn’t new but how does one get used to that look of horror? With an effort, she held his gaze, concentrating on his gray eyes, willing him to break away first. And when he did, she felt a beat of power and then the heat of shame.

So, what’s wrong?

Our point of view changes within the same scene, that’s what. First we are in John’s head, seeing and feeling from his outlook and then we immediately switch to Emily, watching and reacting from her perspective…all in the same paragraph. This POV mishmash is a major no no and will have agents and editors after your head.

I know, I know, a number of best-selling authors break this rule but if you do, understand that you do so at your peril.

Like the old adage: you’ve should first follow the rules before breaking them.

If you found this of interest, you may wish to see the previous How to Write a Mystery posts.

…Of course, there’ll be MORE how-to write a mystery tips and techniques continued in the next Friday post as we move on to developing the three types of characters that commonly populate genre fiction in Haven’t We Met Before? Part 15.

Find out further information or how to purchase my mystery-writing primer e-book, jam-packed with ways to immediately improve your writing, by clicking Youdunit Whodunit (only $2.99US!).