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For some odd reason, last December Barnes and Noble chose to deactivate two of my mystery e-book titles (A Hemorrhaging of Souls and Teed Off!).
With a little advice from Mark and Bill and their fab free Style Guide at Smashwords.com, I updated my e-books and resubmitted them in the Spring…to a resounding silence.
I tried to be patient, after all, the Smashwords’ distribution centre clearly indicates that B&N take at least two months to add/update their catalogue.But when the fall rolled around and my other titles, which I had also updated, popped up on B&N, I emailed Smashwords again for an explanation.
And this time, Bill was able to get my e-books re-activated though there’s still no information on why the pair was deactivated in the first place.
Oh, well. You may now buy Teed Off and A Hemorrhaging of Souls through Barnes & Noble.
Only $2.99 US…perhaps a Christmas present for your favourite mystery buff?
Intro: I occasionally teach a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. The students eat it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.
The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.
So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 14)
The last group of posts have concentrated on the story structure of a mystery novel. Been there; done that. Now we’re onto developing characters or as I like to think of it: Ready for my close-up, Mr. DeMille.
In the initial post on character development, I introduced an essential question: Who’s telling your story? You can have more than one storyteller but for our purposes, we’ll stick to one.
You need a point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale. There are two common POVs in fiction writing: First Person, which we discussed in a previous post, and Third Person.
LEMME TELL IT MY WAY: In this Point of View, the writer chooses to tell the story from more of a distance by narrating with “He said” or “They said”. Today, I’m finishing my discussion on POV by offering a couple of cautionary notes.
In the most recent posts, I offered some reasons to choose Third Person POV; and introduced all of the three main viewpoint types: the Limited Multiple POV, the Limited Detached POV and the Know All/Omniscient POV.
One challenge for the newbie writer when using any Point of View is to maintain the appropriate viewpoint and not switch mid-scene. Once you’ve chosen your point of view, STAY in that person’s mindset for the entire scene or chapter.If you wish to tell a scene from another player’s POV, go ahead; just make sure that the reader is witnessing each chunk of the story from a single POV at any one time.
How NOT to write Multiple Third Person Point of View
Consider the following example:
John stared, unable to take his eyes off Emily’s disfigured face. Her nose was deformed, her eye sockets bulged and puckered skin twisted her cheeks. He swallowed, trying to gain time.
Emily stiffened. John’s reaction wasn’t new but how does one get used to that look of horror? With an effort, she held his gaze, concentrating on his gray eyes, willing him to break away first. And when he did, she felt a beat of power and then the heat of shame.
So, what’s wrong?
Our point of view changes within the same scene, that’s what. First we are in John’s head, seeing and feeling from his outlook and then we immediately switch to Emily, watching and reacting from her perspective…all in the same paragraph. This POV mishmash is a major no no and will have agents and editors after your head.
I know, I know, a number of best-selling authors break this rule but if you do, understand that you do so at your peril.
Like the old adage: you’ve should first follow the rules before breaking them.
If you found this of interest, you may wish to see the previous How to Write a Mystery posts.
…Of course, there’ll be MORE how-to write a mystery tips and techniques continued in the next Friday post as we move on to developing the three types of characters that commonly populate genre fiction in Haven’t We Met Before? Part 15.
Find out further information or how to purchase my mystery-writing primer e-book, jam-packed with ways to immediately improve your writing, by clicking Youdunit Whodunit (only $2.99US!).
Intro: I occasionally teach a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. The students eat it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.
The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.
So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 12)
The last group of posts have concentrated on the story structure of a mystery novel. Been there; done that. Now we’re onto developing characters or as I like to think of it: Ready for my close-up, Mr. DeMille.
In the post on character development, I introduced an essential question: Who’s telling your story? You can have more than one storyteller but for our purposes, we’ll stick to one.
You need a point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale. There are two common POVs in fiction writing: First Person, which we discussed in a previous post, and Third Person.
LEMME TELL IT MY WAY: Today, I’m finishing my discussion on Third Person POV.
In this Point of View, the writer chooses to tell the story from more of a distance by narrating with “He said” or “They said”.
In the last few posts, I offered some reasons to choose Third Person POV; and introduced two of the three main viewpoint types: the Limited Multiple POV and the Limited Detached POV.
Today, I’m highlighting the last of the main viewpoint types: the Know All or Omniscient Point of View.Know All/Ominscient POV:
This POV offers the action presented by an omniscient or all-seeing POV; one that makes judgments, interprets and explains.
This viewpoint is very challenging to control and to pull off; however, Elizabeth Hyde succeeds nicely early in THE ABORTIONIST’S DAUGHTER:
“And so instead of studying for her biology exam as planned, Megan Thompson, pre-med freshman at the university, found herself giving in to something larger and decidedly more fun that evening. Not only that, but she gave in with no clue as to what transpired earlier that evening two miles west…”
Notice how the Know All narrator tells us something that happened earlier that the character, Megan, doesn’t know about?
Usually, the reader is drawn through the story through the eyes of one or more third-person POVs but in each instance, the reader knows the same information as the viewpoint narrator.
But in the Omniscient POV, the narrator knows everything about the story, from future to past, and may offer tantalizing bits to the reader.
Personally, I find this POV irritating and somewhat of a cheat, especially when used in crime fiction; it does, however, offer the writer many opportunities unavailable in the other Third Person POVs. What do you think?
If you found this of interest, you may wish to see the previous How to Write a Mystery posts.
…Of course, there’ll be MORE how-to write a mystery tips and techniques continued in the next Friday post as we finish exploring character development in Ready for my close up, Mr. DeMille, Part 14.
Find out further information or how to purchase my mystery-writing primer e-book, jam-packed with ways to immediately improve your writing, click Youdunit Whodunit (only $2.99US!).
Intro: I’ve been teaching a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun College on how to write a mystery novel. My students are eating it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my new Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.
The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit! How to Write Mysteries and offers my tips, techniques and information suitable for crafting of all types of genre writing.
So, even if you write romance, sci-fi, fantasy or horror, please keep reading and learn with us crime writers.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (Part 12)
The last group of posts have concentrated on the story structure of a mystery novel. Been there; done that. Now we’re onto developing characters or as I like to think of it: Ready for my close-up, Mr. DeMille.
In the post on character development, I introduced an essential question: Who’s telling your story? You can have more than one storyteller but for our purposes, we’ll stick to one.
You need a point of view (POV) from which to tell your tale. There are two common POVs in fiction writing: First Person, which we discussed in our last post, and Third Person.
LEMME TELL IT MY WAY: Today, I’m continuing my discussion on Third Person POV.
In this Point of View, the writer chooses to tell the story from more of a distance by narrating with “He said” or “They said”.
In the last two posts, I offered some reasons to choose Third Person POV; and we introduced the Limited Multiple POV, the first of the three main viewpoint types.
Today, I’m highlighting the Limited Detached POV (the second Third Person POV).
Limited Detached or Limited Objective: in this POV, the action is supplied through the eyes/experiences of a detached observer or narrator (can be used with more than one person) who, like a fly on the wall, sees what’s going on but offers no insight, thoughts or comments and cannot jump ahead in the story or into other characters’ minds.
This is the least popular third-person POV as it distances the reader, not offering an emotional connection to the story.
Tom Wolfe uses this POV in The Write Stuff: “Jane, this is Alice. Listen, I just got a call from Betty, and she said she heard something happened out there. Have you heard anything?” This was the way they phrased it, call after call. She picked up the telephone and began relaying this same message to some of the others.
Obviously something has gone seriously wrong in The Right Stuff, yet Alice doesn’t offer us any reaction to what’s happened. The reader is just told the facts of the story, feels at a distance to the action and must interpret it themselves.
This detached/objective POV style may be used in First-person POV as well. Conan Doyle employs it in the Sherlock Holmes’ series, letting good ol’ Watson narrate the stories but offer little comment or reaction.
If you found this of interest, you may wish to see the previous How to Write a Mystery posts.
…Of course, there’ll be MORE how-to write a mystery tips and techniques continued in the next Friday post as we continue exploring character development in Ready for my close up, Mr. DeMille, Part 13.
Find out further information or how to purchase my mystery-writing primer e-book, jam-packed with ways to immediately improve your writing, click Youdunit Whodunit (only $2.99US!).
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