Posts Tagged ‘mystery’

How to Write a Mystery Novel – Victoria, BC Writers’ Workshop

Monday, March 15th, 2010

If you live on Vancouver Island, BC, Canada, and you’ve always wanted to write a mystery novel, then take your fingers off the keyboard and listen up.

I’m excited to announce that I’ve been asked to teach a workshop on writing mystery novels for Camosun College in lovely Victoria, BC. The workshop is based on my experiences crafting a number of mysteries and on my little how-to primer, Youdunit Whodunit!

cover image for Youdunit Whodunit!

The workshop is offered on six consecutive Tuesday evenings from from April 20th to May 25th, 2010. For more details and how to register, go to Mystery Writers’ Workshop at Camosun College.

Here’s the catalog blurb to whet your whistle:

Love reading mysteries? Always wanted to write one? You can – with a few clues from mystery novelist, Nicola Furlong. This practical writing workshop, based on Nicola’s primer Youdunit Whodunit!, is designed for anyone interested in creating crime fiction.

Designed to be more craft than critique oriented, this workshop offers advice you can use immediately to improve your short story, screenplay or novel. Nicola Furlong has published eight mystery novels and a primer on mystery writing. She regularly blogs and speaks about genre writing.

Hope to see you and a sample of your thrilling and mysterious words on April 20th!

Clueing in – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 5/5

Thursday, February 11th, 2010

In previous posts, we’ve discussed the history of the mystery novel and are now identifying the FOUR ELEMENTARY clues that help us understand this genre’s perennial popularity.

We’ve already put the magnifying glass over our first two clues:

Clue 1: The Shocking Out of Place Body, and
Clue 2: The Challenge of the Puzzle.

Now, it’s time to examine the final pair:

CLUE 3: The Affirmation of the Sanctity of Human Life

Each of us believes that our life is important and that no one has the right to end it before time…and rightly so. It’s comforting to know that crime fiction confirms our belief in the sanctity of human life.

In a detective novel, it doesn’t matter if the murder victim was a queen or a prostitute; if her death is suspicious, it is thoroughly investigated by the police, the amateur dick or the avenging angel.

Of course, the goal is to catch and punish the guilty and to restore justice.

Devil in a Blue Dress

Devil in a Blue Dress (Photo: shalaila)

At least, it is for most crime writers. There are some, however, who challenge this tenet, like Minette Walters and Walter Mosley.


Even some of the oldies, like Conan Doyle and Christie, offered a storyline or two where the ‘guilty party’ wasn’t brought officially to book. I believe the very fact that these ‘other suitable endings’ exist strengthens the whole concept of moral rightness.



CLUE 4: The Return to Order from Disorder

By the end of a mystery novel, the world which had suddenly gone mad almost returns to normal and right is restored.

Complete Sherlock Holmes

Complete Sherlock Holmes (Photo: Erie Book Emporium)

This is important for as we know, life goes on. But it’s not the same as it was before the horrific crime. How can it be? Someone’s been murdered and the killer has been captured and punished.

So, with the puzzle solved, the murderer revealed and paying a penalty, the natural balance of life is restored and our dear reader closes the book with a satisfied thump.

Given all this, the real mystery is why we wondered about the popularity of crime / detective fiction in the first place?

Clueing in – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 4/5

Thursday, February 4th, 2010

In our previous posts we’ve investigated the ‘mystery novel’ crime scene. What evidence have we uncovered to help us discover the perennial popularity of this type of genre fiction?

Ah, here are the FOUR elemetary clues:

CLUE 1: The Shocking Out of Place Body

W.H. Auden was first on the scene by observing that there is potential for more horror in one single body on the drawing room floor, than in a dozen, bullet-riddled bodies down a large city’s mean streets.

That’s because it’s personal. We know the individual sprawled on the carpet.

The impact is always greater when it’s brought home to your own doorstep.

Stalker photo by Vladimir Boudko

Stalker (Photo: Vladimir Boudko)

Why do you think the suspect in Murder She Wrote is always related to the main character, Jessica Fletcher?

Or why the serial killer, in any number of books like Dexter, Silence of the Lambs or The Bone Collector, always taunts and targets the protagonist or their family and friends?

If the writer has been successful, the reader cares deeply for and is emotionally connected to the protag, so any attack that hurts the main character is felt vicerally by the audience (at least, that’s the goal!).

CLUE 2: The Challenge of the Puzzle

Everyone loves a mystery, right? We all delight in being puzzled, challenged, intrigued and sometimes even friggin’ scared.

That’s because of the enduring allure of the unknown and our unending desire to know it. It’s just our basic human curiosity.

The Missing Piece

The Missing Piece (Photo: Andronicus Riyono)


Okay. You’re in the interview room, the big light’s in your eyes and the detective’s questions keep on coming.

It’s confession time.

Admit it: you delight in trying to outwit the gumshoe and discover whodunit first. Some of you can’t stand the suspense and even read the ending first (horrors!), just to get the anguish over with!

After all, bragging rights are on the line!

So, the mystery of the perennial popularity of crime fiction is partially solved.

Two clues down, a pair to go. What might they be…

Guess you’ll just have to wait for the final post in this series.

Better yet, why not offer your suggestions?

Clueing In – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 3/5

Friday, January 29th, 2010

Though its origins seem to be the British Isles, the mystery scene hopped across the Pacific into the US in the thirties and forties and was embraced by tough-talking private dicks.

Since then, the mystery scene has gone global and the plot just keeps getting thicker.

Gallows View (Peter Robinson)

Gallows View by Peter Robinson (Photo: Maria Patricio)

There are sleuths of all descriptions—even cats, quadriplegics, and Queen Elizabeth the second—and enough DNA and forensic evidence to choke a morgue full of coroners.

In today’s crime novels, however, the detective is explored as much as the crime. His or her personal life comes into play, colouring, sometimes muddying, the murder investigation. And the ultimate crime takes a serious toll on everyone affected.



In other words, it’s lot more like real life.

Dining with Devils by Gordon Allborg

Dining with Devils by Gordon Allborg

Not only are mysteries being written all over the world, they now explore an amazing variety of themes. And the writing styles range from crisp and hard as a revolver’s butt, to lyrical and smooth as a black mask.


If you want humour, nature, excitement or romance, there’s a whodunit for you. Seeking tragedy, passion, or insight into the human condition? Grab a good crime story and fill your gumshoes.
Speak Ill of the Dead by MJ Maffini

Speak Ill of the Dead by MJ Maffini





So, we’ve investigated the crime scene. What evidence have we uncovered to help us understand its perennial popularity?

The answer’s elementary, my dear Watson, as you’ll see in the next post.

(And thanks to my fellow Canadian crime writers for their cover pics.)

Clueing In – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 2/5

Wednesday, January 20th, 2010

So, we know mysteries and mystery writing is incredibly popular. We also know that the first crime fiction originated and prospered in the UK in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries.

The British whodunits had a charming ’stiff upper lip’ genteel style where, on the surface at least, everyone had lovely manners and no blood or violence ever marred the pages.

But that was about to change when detective fiction went global, starting with a new wave across the pond, along the mean streets of America.

The Postman Always Rings Twice by James M. Cain

The Postman Always Rings Twice

The Private Dick

Post World War II introduced a new character from the United States, the private dick, a hard-boiled, smart-talking fallen angel from the Underwood typewriters of giants like Dashiell Hammett, Raymond Chandler and James M Cain.

These tough-guy outcasts—and they were always guys—gave as good as they got, skirting the lines of morality while usually solving the mystery at their personal expense.

The dialogue was snappy, the women voluptuous and the whiskey sour.

But that was just the start of the explosive global growth in the interest in murder, crime writing and detective fiction. C.S.I., anyone?

We’ll leave that for our next posting.

(And thanks to Islander Books for the vintage cover pic.)

Clueing In – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 1/5

Wednesday, January 13th, 2010

Do you love a good mystery novel? Well, you’re not alone. The crime novel, be it in print, or adapted to the screen or internet, continues to be one of the world’s most beloved genres.

So over the next five posts, we’re going to investigate what’s lurking behind its popularity.

The British Grandfathers:

Historically, the mystery novel began in the mid 1800’s with Edgar Allen Poe and Wilkie Collins. Many say The Woman in White by Wilkie Collins is one of the first novels of detective fiction ever written.

It’s a spooky and romantic tale, told through multiple POV narratives and is intriguing from the get go: “This is the story of what a Woman’s patience can endure, and what a Man’s resolution can achieve.”

221B Baker Street:

The English plot thickened with Arthur Conan Doyle’s splendid consulting detective, Mr. Sherlock Holmes; he of the deerstalker hat, the 7% cocaine solution and the famous phrase, “Elementary, my dear, Watson.”

The English Roses:

Rebecca

Rebecca (photo - K. Lapierre)


Not long after, the women took the reins, plotting and scheming at a raging gallop into the twentieth century.

These early queens of the so-called cozies were: Daphne du Maurier, Agatha Christie and Dorothy L. Sayers.


The Nine Tailors

The Nine Tailors (photo: J. Gardner)

Settings were often a small English village where evil lurked in the library but was never seen.

Amateur sleuths, like Jane Marple and Lord Peter Wimsey, used their personal insight and intellect to nab the killers, leaving the police plods in their wake.

In the end, though, you knew very little about the sleuths or murderers themselves, no one in the stories seemed changed and life went on as usual.

The excitement and drama of the puzzle, the chase and the unmasking of the murderer spread beyond British shores, all the way to the mean streets of America…where we’ll reveal up more clues in the next post.

(Thanks to Katya Lapierre and Jim Gardner for the cover shots.)

A Book Signing Tale for National Bookstore Day

Saturday, November 7th, 2009

Today is National Bookstore Day and I give thanks to the very special people who own and operate bookstores, though they might claim they are owned and operated by their bookstores!

Cover for Teed Off!

Cover for Teed Off!


Some of my faves are Prime Crime in Ottawa, The Sleuth of Baker Street in Toronto, Greenwoods Bookshoppe in Edmonton, Whodunit in Winnipeg and Tanners in Sidney. I have signed books in most of them and they are incredibly supportive to Canadian authors.

In their honour, I offer this little tale of a book signing horror story, originally published by one of the great news/reviews sites, The Mystery Reader.

BTW, this did not happen in any of the above stores!

Book Signing: A Swing and A Miss:

Ahh, book signings — the very essence of the glamorous life of an author.

NOT!

My first mystery, Teed Off! has a pro golfer/coroner as protagonist and women’s professional golf as the backdrop. Being a shameless self-promoter, I attended a number of bookstores and trade shows (golf and women’s) to flog my swinging whodunit.

Picture this, me smiling at my booth, supported from behind by a huge, colourful banner which reads “New Murder-Mystery Novel” plus a few juicy quotes and in front by a table laden with copies of the book and promo material.

Time and time again, a visitor — sucked into the vortex of my pitch “Are you a mystery fan?” — would cautiously approach my booth, then stand, uncertainly, staring at the piles.

Finally, gaining courage, she/he would touch then pick up a paperback only to exclaim “It’s a book!” as if this were a revelation.

“Of course,” I’d reply, hiding my dismay and warming them up with a catch-all spiel, “It’s like Agatha Christie meets the Ladies Professional Golf Association.”

To which, many would reply “Who?” or slicing even deeper into a writer’s heart, “Oh…I thought it was a game.” Or “What a great idea!” In every instance, the book is gingerly replaced followed by “Sorry, I don’t read.”

It’s enough to make you wanna take a five iron to your keyboard.

So, why not visit your favourite bookstore today? And please, tell them I said “Hi”.

Great Review on Amazon.com for Youdunit Whodunit!

Wednesday, October 28th, 2009

Just discovered a terrific new review on Amazon.com for Youdunit Whodunit!, my little how-to write a mystery primer.

Lou Allin, a fellow Canadian crime writer said the following:

The Little How-To Book That Could:

Of the dozen “how to” books on mystery writing I’ve read, most wasted too many trees, and on Vancouver Island, that’s important. One big-name author provided only a single worthwhile nugget of advice in four hundred pages: don’t write about boring people. But Canadians are very innovative, especially about saving time. Didn’t we invent Velcro? Pablum? The Bloody Caesar?

Cover for mystery writing primer, Youdunit Whodunit!

Cover for mystery writing primer, Youdunit Whodunit!

Recently my colleague Nicola Furlong produced a short, compact, and helpful e-book called Youdunit Whodunit. This crash course in mystery writing is as jam packed with gems as Nicola’s signature chocolate-pecan turtles.

For those starting out, or for authors who want to keep their writing on track, YW has twenty-two chapters in three basic innings: Structure, Character, and Story. With a wealth of pithy examples taken from selective authors, she cuts to the chase.

Hit the reader early and hit him hard. Why is the protagonist involved, if it’s not a police procedural? What do you do in mid-story, where a book often bogs? What are the pitfalls of various POV’s? Where do you get your ideas? How should you handle flashbacks and make smooth transitions without the speed bumps which mar even the best books?

Nicola will have you off and running in minutes. She’s an editor, agent, and coach all in one.

It comes as no surprise that the book is introduced and endorsed by two of our northern mystery lionesses, Maureen Jennings and Mary Jane Maffini. With multiple series and decades of best-seller success, when they speak, wise authors listen.

Obviously, I’m thrilled with Lou’s positive reaction to my ebook BUT what I find really neat is her review writing style.

Notice how adroitly she draws you in to the concept of a short ebook (crash course on writing mysteries) by referring both to the environment (wasted trees) and to her perspective (a Vancouver Islander) and then she adds a fun tidbit of Canadian trivia (Velcro, Pablum and the Bloody Ceasar!).

Not only is it an excellent lead in to her review, it doubles as an lovely introduction to Lou Allin, mystery author.

So, once you’ve bought and mastered Youdunit Whodunit!, why not check out Lou’s terrific Belle Palmer Mystery Series and see how a pro does it?

How To Write A Killer Query

Friday, October 16th, 2009

The bad news is that writing a killer query is hard. The good news is that writing a killer query is both art and craft. This means there’s a technique or strategy that you can learn.

And learn you must because it doesn’t matter how beautifully written, how heart-poundingly suspenseful, how knee-buckling funny your manuscript is, no editor or agent is going to see it until they’ve been blown away by your initial query pitch.

I know, I know, you’ve spent months beavering away at your great novel and now you just want someone to read it, love it, publish it. But first, you’ve got to hook ‘em with a couple of paragraphs.

It may seem crazy but no more bizarre than trying to flog a screenplay. Those scriptwriters have to verbally pitch their written words!

So, suck it up. It can be done without too much hair pulling.

A killer query is:

• An advertisement for your book
• Brief
• Punchy
• Personalized for a specific editor or agent
• Crafted to hook the reader’s interest
• Delivered in a writing style that suits the book
• Designed to leave the reader wanting more.

THE BASIC ELEMENTS
(Note: examples below are from the pitch I used for my paranormal sci-fi novel, UnnaturalStates which triggered a number of requests for the full manuscript)

Image of Maggie Comforting John - UnnaturalStates

Image of Maggie Comforting John - UnnaturalStates

First paragraph:

• opening line pitch: two sentences or so that hooks reader’s interest, written in the style of the book.

(e.g., What astounding secret legacy, resurrected from a controversial divine relic, is being shrouded by the stigmatic, pop-evangelist John the Apostle?)

Second paragraph:

• three to five sentences providing more information about the main character and his/her character arc, the central plot and the length and style of the book.

Already revered and reviled for his powers of song and healing, the charismatic superstar’s mythic life tragically unravels after three strangers infiltrate his west-coast Passion Ministry during its intensely anticipated Easter concert week. Their combined inquiries trigger revelation, ruin and murder.

Merging religious and paranormal phenomena with bio-technology and the ethics of cloning, Thy Will Be Done–a 100,000-word suspense novel–explores the devastating consequences fused from the collision between today’s spiritual emptiness and scientific abundance.

Third paragraph:

• two to three sentences about you, such as your qualifications, the reason for writing the book, the possible audience/markets for the book and why you are the one to write and to promote it.

My publishing credits include eight mysteries, two optioned screenplays and one optioned television series. A shameless self-promoter, I attend signings and conferences and maintain my own web site. I am also a member of the Crime Writers of Canada (Vice-President) and of Sisters in Crime.

Fourth paragraph:

• two sentences to ask if they wish to receive sample chapters or the entire manuscript and to thank them for their kind consideration.

Now, sign it. Send it off. Go on to the next one!

Publishing An Ebook Using Smashwords.com (1)

Monday, October 12th, 2009

Many months ago, it occurred to me that ebooks were a huge hit waiting to happen…and I, as an indie author, could join the party. If Japanese commuters were downloading millions of these electronic reads to their smart phones every year, the platform had to have a rosy future.

I own full copyright on a couple of my previously-published mysteries so I figured, why not turn them into instant cash as ebooks?

That was the original idea; how it played out is another story.

My ultimate goal was to have my work available on Amazon’s Kindle e-reader. Right from the get-go, I was blocked. The Kindle market is open only to those publishers who own the lucky trifecta in electronic publishing: a US address, a US-based bank account and a US tax number.

Temporarily stumped, I decided to publish where I could and work on gettting the Amazon info.

To create an ebook, first you need your manuscript in digital form. Makes sense, however, my two mysteries were published a decade ago and both former publishers had gone under…so I had to get my printed books back into digital files.

Thus began hours of scanning (kinda like photocopying forever) and then correcting the scanned pages, for my two books Teed Off! and A Hemorrhaging of Souls.

Boring, time-consuming but essential. Eventually, I had the digital files in Microsoft Word, and was ready to tackle e-booking. After researching online ebook sites, I choose one that seemed straightforward, simple and open to indies like me: Smashwords.com: the ‘people’s ebook site’.

It took some study, a lot of tweaking and a few hair-pulling incidents but amazingly, I was able to upload my work and soon had ebooks for sale online at smashwords-nicola-furlong.

That was pretty cool and I’ll explain how I did it in my next post.