Posts Tagged ‘mystery’

How to Write a Mystery Novel – The Need for a Logline

Wednesday, May 26th, 2010

Taught the last of six sessions in my how to write a mystery novel class at Camosun College in Victoria. A terrific six-pack of writers, all with very strong story ideas, characters and best of all, desire to write.

Based on the tips, tidbits and techniques from my mystery writing primer, Youdunit Whodunit!, we discussed dialogue in depth. Then we went over their logline attempts, with the goal of trying to jam into the germ of a kernel of a seed the essence of their story. (more…)

How to Write A Mystery Novel – 2) Story Structure: Key Elements

Friday, May 21st, 2010

Intro: I’ve been teaching a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun college on how to write a mystery novel. My students are eating it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my new Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.

The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit: How to Write Mysteries.

STORY STRUCTURE (PART 2): HIT ‘EM EARLY; HIT ‘EM HARD

For every good story, there are three main acts: the Beginning, the Middle, and the Ending. You’ve seen C.S.I.; make it interesting!

So, to begin, follow these suggestions:

  • Set the Tone (style and locale) up front
  • Ignore Lewis Carol’s Cheshire Cat and begin AFTER the Beginning
  • Provide very little introductory set up

Chew over this early paragraph from Raymond Chandler’s KILLER IN THE RAIN: (more…)

How to Write A Mystery Novel – 1) Structure: Key Story Elements

Friday, May 14th, 2010

I’ve been teaching a writers’ workshop at our local Camosun college on how to write a mystery novel.

My students are eating it up, telling me that they’re learning lots of practical and usable tips and techniques, so I thought I’d offer bits and pieces of the workshop in my new Friday Mystery Writing blog posts.

The information is gleaned from my little non-fiction e-book primer called Youdunit Whodunit: How to Write Mysteries.

Cover for mystery writing primer, Youdunit Whodunit!

If you don’t write mysteries, don’t worry! Most of my tips, techniques and information suit the crafting of all types of genre writing, including romance, science fiction, horror, even western.

So, let’s get the investigation going, shall we?


STRUCTURE AIN’T NO MYSTERY

At the onset, you may feel overwhelmed with your undertaking but don’t sweat. It’s not paint-by-numbers but it’s also not rocket science. Basically, every good mystery contains key elements and follows a basic structure. Nail these and you’ll have dunnit!
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Unnatural States E-Book Now Available on iPhone & Kindle

Wednesday, May 12th, 2010

I’ve taken my supernatural thriller, originally published as a multimedia Quillr and reworked it into an e-book called Unnatural States .

It’s now available on the iPhone, Kindle and Smashwords website. See links below.

UnnaturalStates

UnnaturalStates

Only $2.99 US for this fast-paced thriller that mixes bioethics, religion and the supernatural.

Check it out at:

iTunes App Store

Amazon.com Kindle

Smashwords.com

Prepare to be intrigued, challenged and shaken up!

The Nervous Nephew – Large Print

Monday, May 10th, 2010

Please forgive this burst of self-congratulatory promo but I’m really chuffed to announce that the first of my novels in Guideposts’ Church Choir Mysteries series has been published in trade paperback.

Nervous Nephew - Original

The Nervous Nephew, one of six that I wrote in the series, is now available in large print sporting a terrific new cover, available through Guideposts and from Amazon.com.

The Church Choir Mysteries series offers enjoyable and inspiring feel good stories starring sixty-something sleuth, Gracie Parks, along with a cast of entertaining characters.

The Nervous Nephew by Nicola Furlong

Nervous Nephew - New


In The Nervous Nephew, Clayton Williams arrives in town, claiming to be the sole relative of Anna Searfoss, an elderly children’s book author. A funny coincidence, given Hollywood’s sudden interest in Anna’s stories. Gracie’s suspicions of the young pretender heighten and she sets out to learn his true identity.

I really enjoyed this book ! It is seldom you will find a mystery that is wonderful for all ages! (Jennifer Smith, Amazon.com review.)

Now that you’ve seen the two covers, lemme know which one you prefer. I bet it’s the same as my choice.

How to Write a Mystery Novel – Victoria, BC Writers’ Workshop

Monday, March 15th, 2010

If you live on Vancouver Island, BC, Canada, and you’ve always wanted to write a mystery novel, then take your fingers off the keyboard and listen up.

I’m excited to announce that I’ve been asked to teach a workshop on writing mystery novels for Camosun College in lovely Victoria, BC. The workshop is based on my experiences crafting a number of mysteries and on my little how-to primer, Youdunit Whodunit!

cover image for Youdunit Whodunit!

The workshop is offered on six consecutive Tuesday evenings from from April 20th to May 25th, 2010. For more details and how to register, go to Mystery Writers’ Workshop at Camosun College.

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Clueing in – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 5/5

Thursday, February 11th, 2010

In previous posts, we’ve discussed the history of the mystery novel and are now identifying the FOUR ELEMENTARY clues that help us understand this genre’s perennial popularity.

We’ve already put the magnifying glass over our first two clues:

Clue 1: The Shocking Out of Place Body, and
Clue 2: The Challenge of the Puzzle.

Now, it’s time to examine the final pair:

CLUE 3: The Affirmation of the Sanctity of Human Life

Each of us believes that our life is important and that no one has the right to end it before time…and rightly so. It’s comforting to know that crime fiction confirms our belief in the sanctity of human life.

In a detective novel, it doesn’t matter if the murder victim was a queen or a prostitute; if her death is suspicious, it is thoroughly investigated by the police, the amateur dick or the avenging angel.

Of course, the goal is to catch and punish the guilty and to restore justice.

Devil in a Blue Dress

Devil in a Blue Dress (Photo: shalaila)

At least, it is for most crime writers. There are some, however, who challenge this tenet, like Minette Walters and Walter Mosley.


Even some of the oldies, like Conan Doyle and Christie, offered a storyline or two where the ‘guilty party’ wasn’t brought officially to book. I believe the very fact that these ‘other suitable endings’ exist strengthens the whole concept of moral rightness.



CLUE 4: The Return to Order from Disorder

By the end of a mystery novel, the world which had suddenly gone mad almost returns to normal and right is restored.

Complete Sherlock Holmes

Complete Sherlock Holmes (Photo: Erie Book Emporium)

This is important for as we know, life goes on. But it’s not the same as it was before the horrific crime. How can it be? Someone’s been murdered and the killer has been captured and punished.

So, with the puzzle solved, the murderer revealed and paying a penalty, the natural balance of life is restored and our dear reader closes the book with a satisfied thump.

Given all this, the real mystery is why we wondered about the popularity of crime / detective fiction in the first place?

Clueing in – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 4/5

Thursday, February 4th, 2010

In our previous posts we’ve investigated the ‘mystery novel’ crime scene. What evidence have we uncovered to help us discover the perennial popularity of this type of genre fiction?

Ah, here are the FOUR elemetary clues:

CLUE 1: The Shocking Out of Place Body

W.H. Auden was first on the scene by observing that there is potential for more horror in one single body on the drawing room floor, than in a dozen, bullet-riddled bodies down a large city’s mean streets.

That’s because it’s personal. We know the individual sprawled on the carpet.

The impact is always greater when it’s brought home to your own doorstep.

Stalker photo by Vladimir Boudko

Stalker (Photo: Vladimir Boudko)

Why do you think the suspect in Murder She Wrote is always related to the main character, Jessica Fletcher?

Or why the serial killer, in any number of books like Dexter, Silence of the Lambs or The Bone Collector, always taunts and targets the protagonist or their family and friends?

If the writer has been successful, the reader cares deeply for and is emotionally connected to the protag, so any attack that hurts the main character is felt vicerally by the audience (at least, that’s the goal!).

CLUE 2: The Challenge of the Puzzle

Everyone loves a mystery, right? We all delight in being puzzled, challenged, intrigued and sometimes even friggin’ scared.

That’s because of the enduring allure of the unknown and our unending desire to know it. It’s just our basic human curiosity.

The Missing Piece

The Missing Piece (Photo: Andronicus Riyono)


Okay. You’re in the interview room, the big light’s in your eyes and the detective’s questions keep on coming.

It’s confession time.

Admit it: you delight in trying to outwit the gumshoe and discover whodunit first. Some of you can’t stand the suspense and even read the ending first (horrors!), just to get the anguish over with!

After all, bragging rights are on the line!

So, the mystery of the perennial popularity of crime fiction is partially solved.

Two clues down, a pair to go. What might they be…

Guess you’ll just have to wait for the final post in this series.

Better yet, why not offer your suggestions?

Clueing In – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 3/5

Friday, January 29th, 2010

Though its origins seem to be the British Isles, the mystery scene hopped across the Pacific into the US in the thirties and forties and was embraced by tough-talking private dicks.

Since then, the mystery scene has gone global and the plot just keeps getting thicker.

Gallows View (Peter Robinson)

Gallows View by Peter Robinson (Photo: Maria Patricio)

There are sleuths of all descriptions—even cats, quadriplegics, and Queen Elizabeth the second—and enough DNA and forensic evidence to choke a morgue full of coroners.

In today’s crime novels, however, the detective is explored as much as the crime. His or her personal life comes into play, colouring, sometimes muddying, the murder investigation. And the ultimate crime takes a serious toll on everyone affected.



In other words, it’s lot more like real life.

Dining with Devils by Gordon Allborg

Dining with Devils by Gordon Allborg

Not only are mysteries being written all over the world, they now explore an amazing variety of themes. And the writing styles range from crisp and hard as a revolver’s butt, to lyrical and smooth as a black mask.


If you want humour, nature, excitement or romance, there’s a whodunit for you. Seeking tragedy, passion, or insight into the human condition? Grab a good crime story and fill your gumshoes.
Speak Ill of the Dead by MJ Maffini

Speak Ill of the Dead by MJ Maffini





So, we’ve investigated the crime scene. What evidence have we uncovered to help us understand its perennial popularity?

The answer’s elementary, my dear Watson, as you’ll see in the next post.

(And thanks to my fellow Canadian crime writers for their cover pics.)

Clueing In – The Perennial Popularity of Mystery Novels: 2/5

Wednesday, January 20th, 2010

So, we know mysteries and mystery writing is incredibly popular. We also know that the first crime fiction originated and prospered in the UK in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries.

The British whodunits had a charming ‘stiff upper lip’ genteel style where, on the surface at least, everyone had lovely manners and no blood or violence ever marred the pages.

But that was about to change when detective fiction went global, starting with a new wave across the pond, along the mean streets of America.

The Postman Always Rings Twice by James M. Cain

The Postman Always Rings Twice

The Private Dick

Post World War II introduced a new character from the United States, the private dick, a hard-boiled, smart-talking fallen angel from the Underwood typewriters of giants like Dashiell Hammett, Raymond Chandler and James M Cain.

These tough-guy outcasts—and they were always guys—gave as good as they got, skirting the lines of morality while usually solving the mystery at their personal expense.

The dialogue was snappy, the women voluptuous and the whiskey sour.

But that was just the start of the explosive global growth in the interest in murder, crime writing and detective fiction. C.S.I., anyone?

We’ll leave that for our next posting.

(And thanks to Islander Books for the vintage cover pic.)